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Dangling Precariously

Posted onMay 15, 2022May 22, 20222 Comments

She dangled precariously out over the ravine. Her arms ached from clutching the dead tree branch that had broken her fall. She could still hear the scattering of small rocks bouncing down the side of the cliff. But had she really fallen or was she pushed? She took a deep, shaky breath, her heart pounding Read More …

CategoriesFiction Blurb, Flash Fiction

Second Round of Beta Readers & Book Proposals

Posted onMay 1, 2022May 13, 2022Leave a comment

I finished editing my manuscript based on feedback from my first round of beta readers!! It was so exciting, I did a happy dance 😊 Then, I shared my manuscript with a second round of beta readers! SO looking forward to their feedback. Meanwhile, I’m working on beta reading another writer’s work. It feels so Read More …

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Being Seen and Not Heard

Posted onApril 15, 2022May 22, 2022Leave a comment

She moved silently down the hall, making sure to avoid the creaking floorboards. At the age of nine, she had almost perfected “being seen and not heard.” Though, her heart still pounded loudly in her chest, screaming to let the rage out. She paused just outside the living room, listening. There was the sound of Read More …

CategoriesFiction Blurb, Flash Fiction

A Helpful “Visual” & In-person Write-ins

Posted onApril 1, 2022April 18, 2022Leave a comment

Being overwhelmed by looking at an entire book manuscript, I took my beta readers’ remaining questions and pasted them into a separate document. Then I typed out the answers to their questions as if I was talking to them. Having that “visual” to look at while finding the places in the manuscript to make the Read More …

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Into the Muck

Posted onMarch 15, 2022May 22, 2022Leave a comment

She dug her elbows deep into the muck, pulling herself forward and further under the old, abandoned farmhouse. To keep from groaning, she bit into the dirty, oil rag tied over her mouth. Her wrists and ankles were raw from the ropes that still held them together. Only minutes before, she had noticed the door Read More …

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A few things can take a long time…

Posted onMarch 1, 2022April 14, 2022Leave a comment

In my last “writing update” post, I said I just needed to rewrite “a few things for clarification and momentum.” Well, I still am working those rewrites 😏 BUT it is going good! Here are some more fun comments from beta readers: You really started strong with the action and the danger… It reminded me Read More …

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Strangle Marks?

Posted onFebruary 15, 2022May 22, 20222 Comments

She woke with a jerk. Pain shot through her body. Where was she? It was dark. She saw lights and heard beeping. As her eyes adjusted, she realized she was in a hospital room, alone. The door opened and a nurse walked in with a smile. “You’re awake.” She watched as the nurse checked her Read More …

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Finished Feedback & ITW

Posted onFebruary 1, 2022January 31, 2022Leave a comment

I finished reading through my beta reader feedback – W00t! I shared some of the fun comments in my last “writing journey” post, but here are some more 😊 You’re really good at hinting at things. THIS GUY IS SO SCARY Really liking the contrast between the two with their “survival” modes Why am I Read More …

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Math Test

Posted onJanuary 15, 2022May 22, 2022Leave a comment

Nayeli sat at the small kitchen table, eating crackers with peanut butter on them and watching her foster mom out of the corner of her eye. Her foster mom rummaged through her backpack, sighing or knitting her brows together each time she picked up a new piece of paper. She flipped open a shiny red Read More …

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Beta Reader Feedback

Posted onJanuary 1, 2022January 19, 2022Leave a comment

The month of December was full of, well, December 😏 Holidays always take up so much time. NOT a bad thing. But in regards to what I got done in the writing world… not much. I would say my main focus was on getting through beta reader feedback. Having beta readers has definitely been wonderful. Read More …

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